{"id":17,"date":"2016-03-11T11:12:03","date_gmt":"2016-03-11T19:12:03","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/pages\/guidelines\/?page_id=17"},"modified":"2022-06-16T12:35:44","modified_gmt":"2022-06-16T19:35:44","slug":"writing-style-guidelines-for-printed-materials","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/writing-style-guidelines-for-printed-materials\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing Style Guidelines for Printed and Online Materials"},"content":{"rendered":"<h2>General Reference Manuals:<\/h2>\n<p><span class=\"inPage\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.worldcat.org\/title\/rules-of-thumb-a-guide-for-writers\/oclc\/809272669\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Rules of Thumb, A Guide for Writers<\/a><\/span>\u00a0by Silverman, Hughes and Wienbroer<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"inPage\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.worldcat.org\/title\/pocket-handbook\/oclc\/50244092&amp;referer=brief_results\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">The Pocket Handbook<\/a><\/span> by Kirszner and Mandell<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"inPage\"> <a href=\"http:\/\/www.worldcat.org\/title\/pocket-style-manual\/oclc\/54441871&amp;referer=brief_results\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">A Pocket Style Manual<\/a><\/span> by Hacker<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"inPage\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.worldcat.org\/title\/elements-of-style\/oclc\/4004812&amp;referer=brief_results\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">The Elements of Style<\/a><\/span> by Strunk and White<\/p>\n<h2>Specific Reference Manual for Writing for Media:<\/h2>\n<p><span class=\"inPage\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.apstylebook.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Associated Press Stylebook<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p>The reference manuals listed above provide helpful answers to most of the common questions writers have when they are composing correspondence, reports, and articles.\u00a0 Each of these reference manuals has been adopted or recommended by one or more departments at Palomar College and therefore should be available in the bookstore.<\/p>\n<p>The rules in these manuals will vary slightly, due to traditional or accepted standards of usage in different fields at different times. For example, news releases and newsletters should be written in accordance with the guidelines in the <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">AP Stylebook<\/span>. For other materials, another style manual may be preferred.\u00a0 The basic principle is to be <strong>consistent<\/strong> within each document in applying guidelines which are appropriate to the document being written.<\/p>\n<h2>Preferred Grammatical Usage and Common Errors<\/h2>\n<h3>Apostrophes have three uses:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Use an apostrophe (&#8216;) to show possession:\n<ol>\n<li><em>John&#8217;s hat, students&#8217; books.\u00a0<\/em>If the word is plural and already ends with <em>s<\/em>, just add an apostrophe.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Use an apostrophe to show a contraction:\n<ol>\n<li><em>We&#8217;re going, she&#8217;s coming.<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Use an apostrophe to show the plural form of a letter or number: <em>A&#8217;s, 3&#8217;s<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Do <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">not<\/span> use an apostrophe to show the plural form of a proper noun.\u00a0(See &#8220;Plurals&#8221; below.)<\/li>\n<li>Do <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">not<\/span> use an apostrophe in a pronoun that is already in possessive form:\n<ol>\n<li>Examples: <em>his, hers, ours, theirs, yours, and its.<\/em>\u00a0(If you don&#8217;t mean <em>it is<\/em>, use <em>its<\/em> <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">without<\/span> the apostrophe.\u00a0 See &#8220;Contractions.&#8221;)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Capitalization:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Basic rule: capitalize only when there is a reason to do so.<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize the names of people, localities, days of the week, and months.<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize public holidays, brand names, and the names of specific events.\n<ol>\n<li>Examples: <em>Fourth of July, Kleenex, Battle of Gettysburg<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>In titles, capitalize the first word, major words, and words of six or more letters.<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize <em>Palomar, Palomar College, Palomar Community College District<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize <em>College<\/em> or <em>District<\/em> or <em>Governing Board<\/em> when referring to Palomar College, the Palomar Community College District, or the Governing Board of the Palomar Community College District.<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize official building names and room names.\n<ol>\n<li>Examples: <em>Dome, Library, Room P-32, Governing Board Room<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize titles of individuals only when the title precedes the name.*<\/li>\n<li>Capitalize full department and division names, but not individual subjects except when they come from names of countries: <em>Department of History, Economics, and Political Science; faculty members teach history, English as a second language, Spanish, and economics<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Do not capitalize seasons of the year or entire words.<\/li>\n<li>Do not capitalize entire names (or the correct spelling cannot be determined).\u00a0Example: Donna <em>DeYarman<\/em>, not <em>DONNA DEYARMAN<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>*It may be necessary to capitalize certain words in legal documents that otherwise would not be capitalized.\u00a0 Also, it may be necessary for personnel offices to capitalize position titles in job announcements, but in other written documents the position titles may not need to be capitalized.<\/p>\n<h3>Commas:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Except in newswriting, use a comma before the final &#8220;and&#8221; in a series.\u00a0Use a comma and a space before <em>but, and, so, yet, or, for<\/em>, and <em>nor<\/em> when they connect two sentences (technically, two independent clauses) into one.\n<ol>\n<li>Example:\u00a0<em>The bus was late, but Jeff was there on time<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Use a comma after a long introductory part of a sentence.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Contractions:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Use &#8220;it&#8217;s&#8221; only when the meaning is &#8220;it is&#8221; and not to show possession.\n<ol>\n<li>Example: <em>Don&#8217;t judge a book by its<\/em> (not it&#8217;s) <em>cover<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Use &#8220;who&#8217;s&#8221; only when the meaning is &#8220;who is&#8221; and not to show possession.\n<ol>\n<li>Examples: <em>&#8220;Who&#8217;s there?<\/em>&#8221;\u00a0 but <em>&#8220;Whose book is that?&#8221;<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Numbers:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>If following AP style, spell out numbers below 10.<\/li>\n<li>If following <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rules of Thum<\/span>b, spell out any number that requires only one or two words; use numerals for numbers requiring three or more words.<\/li>\n<li>Spell out numbers that begin a sentence, or re-word the sentence if awkward.<\/li>\n<li>Use numerals in dates, page references, addresses, percentages, and money:\n<ol>\n<li><em>May 3, 2003; page 2; 7,500 residents; 1140 W. Mission Road; $5.98<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Spell out fractions, such as <em>one-half<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Plurals:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Proper nouns: add &#8220;s&#8221; or &#8220;es.&#8221;\u00a0 Do not use an apostrophe to form the plural.\n<ol>\n<li>Examples: S<em>impsons, Smiths, Joneses<\/em>; not <em>Simpson&#8217;s, Smith&#8217;s, Jones&#8217;<\/em>; \u00a0unless you want to show possession, as in <em>Smiths&#8217; house<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Numbers and letters: use an apostrophe to show plurals, as with <em>4&#8217;s<\/em> and <em>F&#8217;s.<\/em><\/li>\n<li>The word <em>data<\/em> is the plural form of <em>datum<\/em>.\u00a0 Therefore, the data <em>are<\/em> (not <em>is<\/em>) . . .<\/li>\n<li>The word <em>media<\/em> is the plural form of <em>medium<\/em>.\u00a0 Therefore, the <em>media<\/em> are (not <em>is<\/em>) . .<\/li>\n<li>The plural form of <em>alumnus<\/em> (male) is <em>alumni<\/em>. The plural form of <em>alumna<\/em> (female) is <em>alumnae<\/em>.\n<ol>\n<li>Use <em>alumni<\/em> for a group with males and females.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li><em>Criteria<\/em> is the plural form of <em>criterion<\/em>.\u00a0 Therefore, the criteria <em>are<\/em> (not <em>is<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li>To determine whether to start a sentence with &#8220;There is&#8221; or &#8220;There are,&#8221; look or think ahead to determine whether the subject is singular or plural.\n<ol>\n<li>There<em> is<\/em> a major <em>problem<\/em> with this essay.<\/li>\n<li>There <em>are<\/em> several <em>problems<\/em> with this essay.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Common nouns: check a standard dictionary when in doubt.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Quotation Marks:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Use quotation marks around someone&#8217;s exact words only.<\/li>\n<li>After a quotation, a period or comma goes <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">inside<\/span> the quotation marks.<\/li>\n<li>If the sentence continues after a quotation followed by a semicolon, the\u00a0 semicolon goes <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">outside<\/span> the quotation marks.\u00a0 Example: <em>Huck Finn said, &#8220;It&#8217;s lovely to live on a raft&#8221;; however, the raft drifted him into trouble<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Do not use quotation marks around slang.\u00a0Either use the word without quotation marks or find a better word.<\/li>\n<li>For quotations within a quotation, use single quotation marks.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Spelling and Word Usage:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>When referring to the Howard Brubeck Theatre, spell it that way.\u00a0Use &#8220;theatre&#8221; and not &#8220;theater.&#8221;\u00a0 It&#8217;s a tradition at Palomar to do so.<\/li>\n<li>Use &#8220;and&#8221; instead of &#8220;&amp;.\u201d\u00a0 Use &#8220;&amp;&#8221; only when it is part of a formal name.<\/li>\n<li>Use &#8220;\/&#8221; sparingly, as in <em>his\/her<\/em>.\u00a0\u00a0 The slash means &#8220;or,&#8221; not &#8220;and.&#8221;<\/li>\n<li><em>Affect<\/em>, the verb, means to change or influence.<\/li>\n<li><em>Effect<\/em>, the noun, is the result, the consequence.<\/li>\n<li><em>Effect<\/em>, the verb, means to bring about, as<em> to effect change<\/em>.\u00a0 Not used often.<\/li>\n<li><em>A lot<\/em> is always supposed to be written as two words.<\/li>\n<li><em>Already<\/em> is one word, but <em>all right<\/em> is always two words.\u00a0 Do not use <em>alright<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li><em>Appraise<\/em> means to evaluate, as to appraise a house&#8217;s value.<\/li>\n<li><em>Apprise<\/em> means to inform, to make someone aware of a situation.<\/li>\n<li><em>Lay<\/em> or <em>laying<\/em> means to put something down.\u00a0I <em>lay<\/em> the book on the table.\u00a0A hen <em>lays<\/em> eggs.\u00a0The bricklayer is <em>laying<\/em> bricks.<\/li>\n<li><em>Lie<\/em> or <em>lying<\/em> means to recline or to remain at rest.\u00a0The book <em>lies<\/em> on the table.\u00a0Students are <em>lying<\/em> on the beach.<\/li>\n<li>Where it becomes confusing:\n<ol>\n<li>The past tense of <em>lie<\/em> is <em>lay<\/em>.\u00a0 Yesterday the book <em>lay<\/em> on the table all day.<\/li>\n<li>The past tense of <em>lay<\/em> is <em>laid<\/em>.\u00a0 Yesterday he <em>laid<\/em> the book on the table.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Use <em>fewer<\/em> when there are countable items; use <em>less<\/em> when not countable.\n<ol>\n<li>We had <em>fewer<\/em> students last year with <em>less<\/em> confusion, <em>less<\/em> water.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Use <em>number<\/em> when there are countable items; use <em>amount<\/em> when not countable.\n<ol>\n<li>A large <em>number<\/em> of students attended; the <em>amount<\/em> of noise was great.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li><em>Stationary<\/em> means fixed, not moving; <em>stationery<\/em> means envelopes and paper.<\/li>\n<li>If something or someone is <em>unique<\/em>, it is different from any other.\u00a0 Thus it is\u00a0incorrect and illogical to use the terms <em>more unique<\/em> or <em>less unique<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li><em>Like<\/em> is a preposition or a verb, depending on its usage.\u00a0 It is not a conjunction.\n<ol>\n<li>It looks <em>as though<\/em> (not <em>like<\/em>) he studied all night.\u00a0 It seemed <em>like<\/em> daytime.<\/li>\n<li>Do you <em>like<\/em> college?\u00a0 Avoid: \u201c<em>I like really enjoy college<\/em>.\u201d\u00a0 (Take the <em>like<\/em> out.)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li><em>Valuable<\/em> describes something with value, even great value.\u00a0 <em>Invaluable<\/em> describes something or someone with such great value that it cannot be measured. Thus the opposite of <em>valuable<\/em> is <em>not valuable<\/em>, rather than <em>invaluable<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h2>Topics Specific to Palomar College<\/h2>\n<h3>Abbreviations:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>General rule: avoid abbreviations, except for words that are always abbreviated.\n<ol>\n<li>For example, do not use: <em>dept.<\/em>,<em> gov&#8217;t.<\/em>, <em>w\/o<\/em>, <em>Thurs.<\/em>, <em>thru<\/em>, or <em>yr<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Do not use &#8220;PC&#8221; for Palomar College.\u00a0 &#8220;PC&#8221; has many other meanings.<\/li>\n<li>Spell out names the first time they appear in a document.\u00a0 You may wish to put the abbreviation in parentheses after the name and use the abbreviation thereafter.<\/li>\n<li>Preferred abbreviations and official department or office titles:\n<ol>\n<li><strong>AIS<\/strong>: American Indian Studies<\/li>\n<li><strong>ASG<\/strong>: Associated Student Government<\/li>\n<li><strong>ASL<\/strong>: American Sign Language<\/li>\n<li><strong>BOGW<\/strong>: Board of Governors Waiver (of enrollment fee)<\/li>\n<li><strong>CalWORKs<\/strong>: California Work Opportunity and Responsibility to Kids<\/li>\n<li><strong>CCE\/AFT<\/strong>: Council of Classified Employees\/American Federation of Teachers\u00a0(union of classified employees)<\/li>\n<li><strong>CSIT<\/strong>: Computer Science and Information Technology\u00a0(not IS; see below)<\/li>\n<li><strong>DSP&amp;S<\/strong>: Disabled Student Programs and Services<\/li>\n<li><strong>EOP&amp;S<\/strong>: Extended Opportunity Programs and Services<\/li>\n<li><strong>ESL<\/strong>: English as a Second Language<\/li>\n<li><strong>FTE<\/strong>: Full-Time Equivalent<\/li>\n<li><strong>IGETC<\/strong>: Intersegmental General Education Transfer Curriculum<\/li>\n<li><strong>IS<\/strong>: Information Services<\/li>\n<li><strong>MEChA<\/strong>: <em>Movimiento Estudantil Chicano de Aztlan<\/em><\/li>\n<li><strong>PACRA<\/strong>: Palomar College Retirees Association<\/li>\n<li><strong>PAR<\/strong>: Phone and Register (telephone registration system)<\/li>\n<li><strong>PFF<\/strong>: Palomar Faculty Federation (union of faculty members)<\/li>\n<li><strong>PIC<\/strong>: Palomar Identification Card (<em>PIC Card<\/em> is redundant.)<\/li>\n<li><strong>PIN<\/strong>: Personal Identification Number (<em>PIN Number<\/em> is redundant.)<\/li>\n<li><strong>PAO<\/strong>: Public Affairs\u00a0Office<\/li>\n<li><strong>ROP<\/strong>: Regional Occupational Programs<\/li>\n<li><strong>STARS<\/strong>: Student Testing, Advising, and Registration Services<\/li>\n<li><strong>TAG<\/strong>: Transfer Admission Guarantee (to four-year institutions)<\/li>\n<li><strong>TOEFL<\/strong>: Teachers of English as a Foreign Language (and title of a test)<\/li>\n<li><strong>TRIO\/SSS<\/strong>: A set of federally sponsored programs to help qualifying students achieve success.\u00a0Originally there were three programs, hence the name TRIO.\u00a0 SSS stands for Student Support Services, one of the three programs.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Names:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Use <em>Palomar<\/em>, <em>Palomar College<\/em>, or <em>Palomar Community College District<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>When referring to the district&#8217;s campus in San Marcos, it may be called <em>the college campus<\/em> or <em>the San Marcos Campus<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>When referring to an individual education center, it may be called the &#8220;Palomar\u00a0College (location) Center&#8221; or &#8220;the (location) Center.&#8221;\n<ol>\n<li>Examples: <em>Palomar College Escondido Center<\/em>, or <em>Escondido Center<\/em>.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/li>\n<li>Each vice president supervises an <em>area<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Each dean supervises a <em>division<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Each chairperson supervises a <em>department<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Directors and managers supervise <em>programs<\/em> or <em>offices<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>The <em>college logo<\/em> contains the words, &#8220;Palomar College&#8221; and &#8220;Learning for Success&#8221; with a star and representation of a comet trail.\u00a0 It is used on stationery and publications.<\/li>\n<li>The <em>college word mark<\/em> is the name &#8220;Palomar College&#8221; in Gill Sans typeface.<\/li>\n<li>The college seal is a six-sided emblem with the words \u201cPalomar College&#8221; above a circle and \u201cFounded 1946\u201d below the circle, which contains a torch and an outline of San Diego County.\u00a0 Its use is restricted to diplomas and a small number of other official documents.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Titles:<\/h3>\n<ol>\n<li>Full names and academic degrees of individuals are listed in the catalog.<\/li>\n<li>In directories and in most other publications, the preferred first or middle\u00a0name and the last name are used, plus the title &#8220;Dr.&#8221; when applicable.<\/li>\n<li>Exceptions include letterhead and business cards where the highest degree, initials, and professional accreditation may also be listed.<\/li>\n<li>If &#8220;Dr.&#8221; is used, the appropriate suffix (Ed.D., Ph.D.) should not be used.\u00a0Use one or the other to avoid redundancy.<\/li>\n<li>Governing Board members&#8217; full names and highest degrees earned should be listed on official letterhead stationery and in major publications.<\/li>\n<li>Department heads are <em>chairs<\/em> or <em>chairpersons<\/em>, not <em>chairmen<\/em> or <em>chairwomen<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Palomar grants <em>Associate in Arts<\/em> or<em> A.A.<\/em> degrees, <em>Certificates of Achievement<\/em>, and <em>Certificates of Proficiency<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li>Titles of books, magazines, plays, newspapers, movies, and television programs should be <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">underlined<\/span> or <em>italicized<\/em>.\u00a0 Underlining and italicizing are equivalent; use one or the other consistently.<\/li>\n<li>Put quotation marks around titles of shorter works, such as short stories, articles, poems, songs, and chapter titles.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3>Non-discrimination Statement<\/h3>\n<p>Should be included in all publications with external distribution.\u00a0 Example: <em>Palomar College offers equal educational and employment opportunities regardless of sex, race, color, religion, ancestry, age, marital status, sexual orientation, national origin, or disability<\/em>.<\/p>\n<h3>Logo or Word Mark<\/h3>\n<p>Should be printed on all publications with external distribution and on other materials representing the College to the public, including signs, banners, clothing, and vehicles.<\/p>\n<h3>Sample Descriptive Statement for Publications<\/h3>\n<p>The Palomar Community College District, is a single college district founded in 1946. The District covers 2,555 square miles. Palomar College\u00a0is a public two-year community college. The Palomar campus is located in San Marcos, California, approximately 30 miles north of San Diego. Palomar enrolls approximately 25,000 full-time and part-time students. Residents of California are charged only $46 per unit. \u00a0At Palomar, students may choose from over 200 associate degree and certificate programs, complete the first two years of a bachelor\u2019s degree, train for a career, or enjoy personal enrichment classes for lifelong learning.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>General Reference Manuals: Rules of Thumb, A Guide for Writers\u00a0by Silverman, Hughes and Wienbroer The Pocket Handbook by Kirszner and Mandell A Pocket Style Manual by Hacker The Elements of Style by Strunk and White Specific Reference Manual for Writing for Media: Associated Press Stylebook The reference manuals listed above provide helpful answers to most&hellip; <a class=\"continue\" href=\"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/writing-style-guidelines-for-printed-materials\/\">Continue Reading<span> Writing Style Guidelines for Printed and Online Materials<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":402,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-17","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/17","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/402"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=17"}],"version-history":[{"count":32,"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/17\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":465,"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/17\/revisions\/465"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.palomar.edu\/guidelines\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=17"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}